Second Presentation (20/12/2012)

I have just sat back down from my FMP presentation 2, wasn't half bad, I didn't keep track with my script for my presentation I stuttered and my confidence wasn't great either. My feedback for the presentation wasn't half bad they agreed with me in I need more confidence, I think next time I need a script to follow

- I will add a link for the presentation later on here

By the way, Happy Christmas (if you celebrate it) and Happy Apocalypse, some part of me hopes the Mayans were right

Update (10/01/2013)

I got my feedback from tutors today, they mostly all said roughly the same thing, some were more harsh than others but it is constructive criticism after all is what it is. I'll upload them if I ever get my hands on the feedback sheets again to scan in and upload to here. 

Feedback from Peers

- In depth recap

- Plenty of research

- Detailed examples

 

- Need more self-confidence

- Presentations could do with more pictures and less text

- Generally more information about my title: Deaths Apprentice

I will take this feedback into consideration but some of the feedback like "more pictures and less text" this can't simply be done because this isn't the way my FMP works until I get to the right stage. As well as this my FMP is mostly text based and I will be working on Word for most of it, so their simply can't be any images unless it supports or is what I'm writing about. 

Not updated for a while and today (07/12/12)

Not updated this blog for a while now, just a quick update really, just to say that nothing is going as planned and at the current moment like the other people in my class we have all put our FMPs to the side and worked on our looming and over hanging assignment deadlines instead of our FMP, especially myself, I'm still in the design stage and still collecting images for my mood board of the 3 separate worlds/ realms/ dimensions (what ever they're called), link below to what I've done: 

- Link to mood board of what the worlds are going to look like (updated) 

But today, (today being 07/12/2012, about what 14 days till our supposed doomsday (yes in believe in THAT)) I was told that I should update my project proposal for any changes so in terms of me: the timetable, I uploaded the first draft what 19 October I would check the blog post around that date for the 1st draft, but anyway I'll upload the second draft today to Google Docs at some point and attach it to a link below:

- Link to the project proposal Second draft 

As well today I was told my next presentation will be on the 20/ 12/ 12 and will be titled: Feasibility (not started it, yet but I will eventually)