- 28/03/13
Today I presented my third and penultimate presentation, the feedback I received from my tutor was:- Explained my FMP well
- Knows his FMP well
- Feasibility
- I will link my presentation here to show you what exactly I presented
The speaker notes I had which by the way I didn't stick to because in it I sort of knew what I was talking about
Another criticism I had was that on the reading part near the end I was too quite, advice was to have a voice over for the paragraph itself
As of my say on the changes going from what about around the area of 30 chapters to 5 is very big, I know this and my tutor said its cutting the amount by a sixth, over Easter I'm going to concentrate on getting my FMP done. As my tutor reminded us we have about 5 weeks left
Anyway you'll hear from me again when the first chapters done